Talk:Tools and Techniques of Along the River During QIngming Festival

Luciano's First Draft Feedback
Found some mistakes:1. The painter is called Zhang Zeduan, not Zerui Zhang. 2. I think this painting was paint in silk or cloth, rather than paper. 3. This painting shows North Song dynasty's capital, Kaifeng or called Bianliang in that time, but you write Beijing. 法外狂徒江泽民 (talk) 01:07, April 20, 2017 (UTC)法外狂魔江泽民

Comment by Chenmei Lin I did notice that mistake of the painter's name. After I looked your page, I think you were writing good. I did not learn that much information of the tools about this painting, so I don't know which one (Luciano or you) is right and I think you could research more information and maybe rivise it.

Xiao Hu's First Draft Feedback
the langguage is good.

However, there are some of the detail resources which were not inculding in her references.

I wished to see more of the resources that in Chinese and translated into English.

As Luciano commented last week. I also found that the painting was actually not painted on the paper but on a staff like cloth called "juan" in Chinese. The information could be found on the Baidu Baike page of the Along the River During Qingming Festival. Chenmei Lin (talk) 21:30, April 27, 2017 (UTC)Chenmei Lin