Talk:Along the River During Qingming Festival: Attitudes and Worth

Comment by Weizhi Duan

I would say what what you write is not enough. I would give my suggestions. Attitudes include the attitude form ancient people and modern people. Ancient people can divided as emperor, officer, commom people, the painter himself. You have already write something about the emperor, which is good and important. About comon people, why do not you use the stories from the painting to describe their normal life, which can be expended with the background at that time. About officer, it is a good idea for you to relate the meaning of the painting with officers. Although the painting is about prosperous live of Song dynasty, the painter wanted to warn people that do not indulge in such flourish life.

For nomal people' attitude, you can relate with the meaing the painting bring to us nowadays.

Besides, value of the picture can be mentioned as well.Duanw3 (talk) 14:52, April 19, 2017 (UTC)

This is too short, need work hard too add more details.法外狂徒江泽民 (talk) 00:55, April 20, 2017 (UTC)法外狂徒江泽民

“Along the River During the Qingming Festival”  (清明上河图,  Qīngmíng Shànghé Tú）this is the right  fomat since Tony gave me the example. It is a good thing that you write more than last time. However, the context is still not enough. In my opinon, you can combine some stories that happened in the painting to express people attitude in that time. Duanw3 (talk) 23:45, April 26, 2017 (UTC)Duanw3