Talk:History Behind Along the River During Qingming Festival

Comment by Weizhi Duan You are good at writing history. You relate fetures at that time with other dynasty. But I think your description about the painting is too much. Why do not you analize the economy at that time as you said before. Beijing at that time is very prosperous. However, since the corruption of the government, the economy is going down.

Comment by Chenmei Lin I know you are good at learning history and writing information about history. But in this page, I think you are more likely describing the whole painting instead of focusing on its history.

the history part is good but I expect to see more about the direct describe of the painting that we talked about.

Why do not you use "Along the river" to represent the whole name of the painting? You write more about economics, which is different than your first draft. I think you can combine meaning with history whci could make the paper more evident. Duanw3 (talk) 23:43, April 26, 2017 (UTC)Duanw3

You didn't write the pinyin of the painting when the name of the painting fisrt shows in the page and why not using the English name of the painting. Chenmei Lin (talk) 21:13, April 27, 2017 (UTC)Chenmei Lin