Talk:Pollution During Spring Festival

Group Comment
It looks more attractive while adding picture in webpage. And you wrote the pollution in Chunyun which can spark my inspiration on thinking more points in my subtopic. MargaretLiu (talk) 20:59, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

I saw you added in pictures, which are attracting reader's attention during reading. Those academic papers are to long to read with less paragraphs and no pictures and video in it. I think adding video can be more attractive. MargaretLiu (talk) 02:38, April 27, 2017 (UTC)

can add more subtopic and talk about more what caused the pollution issues. For holiday, it more about the spring festival. use different aspects to talk about it. and add more details.Ykykykk (talk) 20:37, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

About pullution on Spring Festival, I think can add more types of pullution, talk something about what is the seriousest pollution around spring festival and more data about it.